NSF-informed editorial refinement — 21 October 2026

Purpose and limits

These three two-page (approximately) texts are concept notes for a prospective collaboration with Stephanie Pierce’s comparative and evolutionary biomechanics group, not a submitted NSF proposal and not a claim of access to Pierce-lab data. The 15-page chart shared in a LinkedIn post represents one scientist’s retrospective account of past awards, not a mandated page or word allocation. For an actual NSF submission, consult the current PAPPG and the specific solicitation; intellectual merit and broader impacts are independently reviewed.

Editorial diagnosis

The prior drafts already featured a clear state-of-the-art review, explicit hypotheses, three aims, baselines, falsifiers, held-out testing and cautious interpretation. Expanding them to 15 pages would be counterproductive for a lab-introduction package. The deficits relative to grant-review logic were more practical: outputs of aim 3 were implicit; immediate dependencies and stage gates were scattered; the unique intellectual contribution was late in the text; and societal/teaching benefits were not articulated.

Applied edits (to all three DOCX files and their matched demo-page text)

  1. A concrete output is now named at the end of Aim 3.
  2. The generic near-term pilot paragraph is replaced with a conditional 0–3, 4–9 and 10–18-month sequence, spelling out what can be concluded without specimen-matched data.
  3. The lab-fit section is reframed as Intellectual merit and complementary expertise, distinguishing the contribution from published Pierce-group anatomy and mechanics work.
  4. A short, distinct Broader impacts section commits to testable open software/teaching deliverables with rights and resource qualifications. It does not pretend teaching collaborations, specimen access, or experimental studies are agreed.
  5. Relevant references, paper novelty caveats, demo logic and the animated landing-page effects are unchanged.

Project-specific decisive results

Remaining prerequisites for a competitive NSF submission

A real solicitation, funded duration and budget, data/specimen access or a confirmed contingency dataset, sample-size and design analysis, complete methodology, team roles and facilities, a full data-management plan, preliminary results, a distinct evaluated broader-impacts partnership and any prior NSF support sections applicable to the eventual PI/co-PIs. The open teaching resource described here is a credible concept-note seed, not a fully costed/assessed outreach program. The studies remain proposals, not validated claims.

NSF official sources checked

Implementation verification

The three HTML proposal texts were rebuilt directly from their edited Word paragraphs; original scripts, canvas animations and home-page assets are retained. All three Word files were rendered and visually inspected as two-page documents. The website proposal sections were checked for paragraph-level equivalence with DOCX, scripts passed syntax checks, and the home page and the three interactive demo scripts remained byte-for-byte unchanged outside the proposal sections. A live Chromium/browser navigation smoke test was attempted but blocked by the execution environment; no claim of successful visual web testing is made.